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[Right Click]

indeed

sombody learend how to use gotoAndPlay! lol

lol not bad for a beginer.
focus on makin your art work better (and for the love of god shtay away from teh stiks untill you know how to ues them!!!) and dont make it so damn linier.

Meditori responds:

Srry bout the lines can't draw straight with this new mouse cuz it SUCKS!

[Ball Revamped :: Duo]

happy jmtb02 day!

I must ask though. did John aprove the making of that? I asked permission, and he said yes, but i think your supose to ask first.
their was a few minor errors in your engin that made the games feel a bit off, but over all good job. the game looked extreemly polished and dispite it dident keep my interest ti'lll the end of the game (of witch im asuming there is a final boss fight) decent job.

AsianSpark responds:

Aske'd. Got the permission.

[archer]

well

its a half decent engine, but their are some magor bugs in it. first of those graphics are just pathetic. it looks like your little sister aged 1 drew them. it had good spawning. now what you need to do is make the animations for these things. and add a power bar, for the arrows. and an up and down for shooting. make it more like bow master... and for the love of god, lose the warcraft music. your game is not worthy

egg82 responds:

lol. Better graphics. Got it.

[Biblenaire]

oh my fucking god

no randomitivity, which is the one thing that your good at.
the lifelines dont work, even though in the situation your in it is truly incredably simple
the questions are virtualy imposable past question 3 for sombody who doesent regularly atend church or for that matter even belive in god (which i dont). and then to pull of this score? how the fuck do you do it. you must be jesus.

nabibrian responds:

I am working on a version that has over a thousand questions to be used.

If you would have read the authors's comments you would have found the reason why the lifelines were inactive.

In your words you: "don't believe in God!" OK! Now, the reason you felt the need to infom me of this was why? Again, READ THE AUTHORS COMMENTS!

I myself was suprised at the score this game received as well.

I am NOT Jesus. But I like cheeses! :P

[Those darn bugs!]

wow

wow you must be realy good lookin to have so many friends to five this.

graphics = failure
random = hardly, and if so, it was the exact same thing over and over again

you progress way to fast. you couldent take the time to use somthing besides a radial gradient on everithing c'ept the bugs and the back round. jesus. you must be like jesus or somthing.

nabibrian responds:

Good looking. Thanks!

I have not enticed anyone to 5 any of my flash submissions.

I am NOT Jesus but I like cheeses :P

[OOP Platformer Tutorial]

good tut

that was a good tut filled with some fairly advanced actionscript. even though i wasent all that fond of your ww game (probly cause it beet mine, lol) it did teach about some sweet things. good job!

smokinjoeevil responds:

Thanks... I think.

[Stigg's Veggie-Matic]

stickey in some places but:

ok, decent game... but first? i hope they make some serious modifications on that cause my arm hearts like a bitch.... im thinking law suit... hehehe im suing you for 4000 smackers because your game broke my arm.... hehehe.

things to improve apon:
ok this is a game for little kids, is that realy who your targeting that at? just cause you have the theme of vegtables doesent mean its a kids game. that was a bitch for me, and im in gread 9. sory buti just cant justify that being a first place.
i never acualy got hit in the game but im asuming there is a death function. i did get close a few times tho. were im going with this is a kindergardener has no chance of seeing the punchline at the end. another reason why i cant see this wining.

things done well:
wow. that was a fantastic gun system. absolutly excelent... despite it was shooting vegitables. XD
excelent drawings and showmanship throughout (except the main menu. if you can make a game like that you could have put a little more effort in the main menu)
great randomitivity with the spawning and what not.

over all:
good game, however it needs some improvement. 7/10

WarpZone responds:

Heh. Sorry your arm hurts. :P I provided a pause button, though, that's what it's there for.

I've had people tell me that stage 1 is too easy, stage 6 is too hard, the whole game is too easy to be any fun, the whole game is too hard for children to beat, etc. etc.

The thing you have to keep in mind is, the game is for kids aged 5-12. That doesn't mean a 5 year old should be able to sit down and beat the game on his first try, the way you did. It also doesn't mean a 12 year old should find it almost impossible to beat and get hours of replay value out of trying to find a way to somehow conqure the last boss. It means 5 year olds should be able to play for a little while before the game ends, and 12 year olds should be able to beat the game, with maybe a little effort.

Now, there are factors that are beyond my control here that can make the game more challenging. What type of mouse interface you have. How old you are. How experienced of a gamer you are. The faster you feed wiggis, the faster new ones spawn, so in theory if you're a twitch gamer, you might wear yourself out in the early stages and end up with a tired hand by the time you gte to stage 6. I can't help it if that's the way you ended up playing. I did it this way so that a kid with good reflexes would always have something to shoot at, while a kid with poor reflexes could take his time working on one target at a time.

Your suggestions are all good ones, and you're not the first person to suggest them. Unfortunately, I only had 10 days to work on this. Towards the end, I was running out of time, and I implemented the stuff I could, with the most important gameplay features taking priority over stuff that would just be "nice to have" or stuff that I knew would take several days to develop. (Days which I didn't have, by that point.)

I'm glad you found it decent, though. I kinda think that's why it won. Not because everyone who played it thought it was perfect, but because no one who played it got frustrated, confused, or bored. In other words, it won because nobody hated it.

[WiggiWorld Games]

wow

that was definatly score based! and sucking up enough on the quiz? and i was promised being able to print my wiggy!... not that i realy care.

ok what you did good:
-quite honestly those were prety decent graphics.
-although it doesent quite meat all requirenmints, it is a half decent game
-3 things to do, which gives a time consumer (for all 10 minutes)
-the maze was very smothe
-the quize was rather easy(good for kids)
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things not done good:
-first off the maze was far to simple
-the maze was not cheet profed (eg click/drag&right click)
-the dressup was realy lame
-i found no printing functionality whatsoever

over all, it wasent bad, it just wasent good.

Saint-Anarchy responds:

Cheers for your opinion and thanks for the comments. There was going to be a print button, but the Action Script went all lame (nothing new there). Also, i left out stopping cheating on the maze because i doubted that younger kids would realise. Anyway thanks for the review.

[Wiggis in Flight]

wow

make a lvl designer to woo ng. doubt that will "woo" the judges

gankro responds:

weird...glitch... oh well the above response is meant for this... and to the above review: Thanks!

[Kill The Stick]

zomfg! el ow el! teh funy stick man die!

that, my friend. was freeking awessome! great job!

katzman responds:

thank u